Star Tribune scrubs Kiffmeyer’s name from stories on faith-based bank closure

By Paul Schmelzer
Monday, October 26, 2009 at 12:35 pm
Former Secretary of State Mary Kiffmeyer. Photo: Paul Schmelzer, Minnesota Independent

Former Secretary of State Mary Kiffmeyer. Photo: Paul Schmelzer, Minnesota Independent

Updated: Shortly after the Star Tribune reported that the faith-based Riverview Community Bank had been shut down by the state, we — like others — noticed that the paper’s online report deleted a reference to Mary Kiffmeyer, the sometimes controversial former Secretary of State and current state representative who has close ties to the bank. And, according to Lexis-Nexis, the Pioneer Press’ online story was also modified since publication Friday to remove mention of the Big Lake Republican. Why?

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Strib business reporter Chris Serres says it’s a “relevant question” that has a “mundane answer.”

“We had very tight space in Saturday’s paper and had to cut information on the story that ran online, so I cut out Kiffmeyer,” he told the Minnesota Independent, adding that it was his choice, rather than an editor’s, what got cut. “The online version was updated to match the latest print version of the story.”

But the deleted line appears to have saved only 18 words (here’s a pasted-in version of the piece at a Google Group; the story doesn’t appear in Lexis-Nexis), and the first version of the story, which ran at 419 words, is actually much shorter than the 554-word piece that’s available at StarTribune.com.

To that, Serres said he wanted to focus more on the “God stuff,” instead of Kiffmeyer’s ties to the bank, which he feels fewer people know about. A Federal Reserve Bank agreement, signed by Kiffmeyer on Oct. 9, lists her as president and director of American Eagle Financial Corporation, which owns and controls Riverview Community Bank.

“I thought that stuff was more interesting than Mary Kiffmeyer,” he said.  Then, noting the dozen or so complaints he got, he added, “given the number of phone calls and emails, there’s a pretty good argument it could’ve been in the story. Relevance is often in the eyes of the beholder.”

However, as I prepared this post, I noticed that the Pioneer Press has also removed mention of Kiffmeyer from its story. According to Lexis-Nexis, this innocuous-seeming line was removed from the online story: “Mary Kiffmeyer, former Minnesota secretary of state, was on the bank’s board of directors, according to the Minnesota Bankers Association’s bank directory.” (In one instance, the line does appear in an AP-syndicated version of the story.)

PiPress reporter Nicole Garrison-Sprenger has not yet responded to my email and voicemail queries on the topic. I did call Serres of the Star Tribune back to ask if Kiffmeyer or her representative called him to request modifications to the story.

“No. Absolutely not,” he told me. “I never got a call from anyone at the bank, a board member, anyone, period.”

But he seemed less certain when I again asked him if he — not an editor — removed the mention of Kiffmeyer.  He twice replied, “I think I took it out.” Finally, he replied, “I had to cut stuff out of the story to make it fit. Yeah, it was my call.”

Update: Garrison-Sprenger emails that the Pioneer Press currently has two versions of the story online. The first one, which didn’t include Kiffmeyer’s name, was published before she’d looked into the bank’s ownership and board members; the newer one, which ran in the print edition, includes mention of Kiffmeyer.

Comments

13 Comments

Karl
Comment posted October 26, 2009 @ 1:46 pm

“To that, Serres said he wanted to focus more on the “God stuff,” instead of Kiffmeyer’s ties to the bank, which he feels fewer people know about.”

And far fewer still will know about it thanks to this editorial decision to protect a prominent Republican. As an editor and writer for over 30 years, I find Serres’ explanation laughable, if not downright deceitful. Or has the craft of journalism fallen that far? Bank President Kiffmeyer’s name not only should have been in the story, it should have been in the lead and headline.


Mac
Comment posted October 26, 2009 @ 2:21 pm

Agreed. Kiffmeyer’s involvement with this (former) controversial bank should be central to the story.

Evidently, someone from her camp got wind of this story and demanded her name be removed and the papers caved. That’s the only explanation I would deem plausible, though one that paints the Star Tribune & Pioneer Press is a very poor light.

Guess she didn’t want to be associated with failure…imagine that.


ironic
Comment posted October 26, 2009 @ 3:07 pm

Do we REALLY think the media is not state run?
Wag the Dog, or in Kiffmeyer’s instance, Wag the God.
How could an even halfway credible journalist think that a prominent politician’s prominent role in a failed bank that cost taxpayers money to buy up is not relevant?


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Eric Ferguson
Comment posted October 26, 2009 @ 3:34 pm

I’m not convinced there was something nefarious here. Leaving Kiffmeyer’s ties out seems like questionable news judgment and it certainly protected her, but I don’t see the evidence the reporters are being deceitful in their explanations or attempting to play political favorites. An honest mistake seems much more likely.


Mike Nagell
Comment posted October 26, 2009 @ 4:15 pm

I am happy to get the full story about this, finally.


BJ
Comment posted October 26, 2009 @ 4:48 pm

So the Strib tried to keep a GOP’ers name clean? Seems like the GOP should stop calling the Strib left leaning?


har har
Comment posted October 26, 2009 @ 11:51 pm

So the bankrupt and FAIL strib did not report on Kiffy’s bank
connection. How much do they owe her?


David Cay Johnston
Comment posted October 27, 2009 @ 4:58 am

Cutting to fit the print space is a common deadline practice.

Slashing 18 words can make the difference in getting a story to fit the space. On deadline a story sometimes has to be trimmed by, say, 17 lines out of 62. When that happens reporters who are around can do it themselves. Otherwise their copy gets cut by a copy editor, who try as she may doe snot know the story as well and may make cuts that the writer (whose name is on the piece) will dislike.

The best way to do this is by tightening paragraphs that have a few characters or words in a line, known as “killing widows and orphans.”

Each line saved means about five words so when a line has just two letters or one word, tightening one or more sentences saves more ideas.

The question to ask is the reporter’s reason for making sure print matches online, instead of letting online run longer…..his policy? Management policy?

Or is this, as at most newspapers, an automated function so that when the print version is updated the online version is automatically updated to match the changes, including cuts for space.

During a day’s press run there will be various editions of the same issue and they will not match because over time the available facts change. The article on the sports contest that was half over for the bulldog edition will, by the four star final, be over and the story revised to show the final score and interesting plays in the second half.

Cutting political affiliations or business connections may make the print it the space, but is usually not the smartest thing to cut. But cutting details is a reality and on deadline the quality of choices made on what to cut may not be the most carefully thought through…..


ZNOFOB
Comment posted October 27, 2009 @ 1:38 pm

but of course! They are a large part and parcel of mainstream media, who have long ago lost their objectivity and are no longer the informants for the people. It is why the paper is going DOWN. My only complaint is that it is taking too long to fold their crappy, half-reported, half-manipulated paper!


Ann
Comment posted October 27, 2009 @ 4:10 pm

Shameful Kiffmeyer used religion to milk people of their hard earned money. I wish she would just leave our state


Henk
Comment posted October 29, 2009 @ 6:12 pm

Wait a minute, why did God remove his blessing from this bank and be extension Kiffmeyer? Oh my gosh someone must have sinned. Who’s been watching Mary lately?


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